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So Tired-The Pills by ~ConfusedSoul:iconConfusedSoul:

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I've been so damn tired
For way to long
Feels like I have'nt slept in a month
I just want some rest

They told me this would happen
The deppresion would make me weak
And the Epilepsy would make me tired
My Minds to shattered for a good nights sleep

When they diagnosed me with these problems
They said everything would be alright
A bit of time and five pills a day
And I would be fine

I told them where they could put thier pills
They said it would be for the best
And I would'nt feel so tired anymore
I said I did'nt care

But now im so tired
And the pills sit unopend
Downstairs on the kitchen counter
And my thoughts turn to them

If I take them I won't be so exhausted
Maybe I should just take them all
THen I could sleep forever
Thats what I really want...
©2005-2009 ~ConfusedSoul
:iconconfusedsoul:

Author's Comments

Alright first poem back on the page.
Heres an update, ive been diagnosed with Epilepsy (means you have seizures) thought I should notify you of that so this makes sense.
Secondly im not gonna kill myself with pills I was just feelin angsty today.

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:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Sep 19, 2005, 9:05:58 PM
killing yourself with pills is boreing.
nicely written poem

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconconfusedsoul:
~ConfusedSoul Sep 19, 2005, 10:15:23 PM
Im not sure if that was a complement or not but ill take it as one since im peti. THanks!
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Sep 19, 2005, 10:19:35 PM
hah, your welcome :)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:icontheshroudedone91:
~TheShroudedOne91 Sep 19, 2005, 10:42:54 PM
It's pretty depressing, but cool at the same time, nicely done. :clap:

Also nice to hear from you again :)

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No day passes without there being at least one good thing about it...
:icongc-fan:
~GC-Fan Sep 22, 2005, 8:37:03 PM
good poem! very well written! keep it up

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"i feel like that ketchup comercial with the anticipation song"
four hours later "my brain feels like scrambled eggs"
"heh scrambled eggs and ketchup"

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:icontearsoftorment:
~TearsOfTorment Sep 28, 2005, 11:26:22 AM
:hug:

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:smooch: Love never wanted me but I took it anyway. :rose: :heart:
:iconconfusedsoul:
~ConfusedSoul Oct 1, 2005, 8:41:30 PM
Random hug! I loves em *hugs back*
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